Sparrowpelt

[Flamefur]

Sparrowpelt proudly lifted his muzzle as he sat on the highest branch in the Great Tree. When Cloudstar was absent, he would be in charge. Cloudstar would eventually befriend him. Secretly, though, Sparrowpelt was afraid that the ShadowClan leader would shun him as deputy. No, he would never be that cold at heart, would he? Sparrowpelt yet out a sudden yowl to a tom down below.
"Hey, Deepshade! Wait until the elders, kits and queens are fed!" Sparrowpelt growled, hissing at the black warrior.
Would he really make a loyal deputy?

[sparrowpelt]

Sparrowpelt proudly lifted his muzzle as he sat on the highest branch in the Great Tree. When Cloudstar was absent, he would be in charge. Cloudstar would eventually befriend him. Secretly, though, Sparrowpelt was afraid that the ShadowClan leader would shun him as deputy. No, he would never be that cold at heart, would he? Sparrowpelt yet out a sudden yowl to a tom down below.
"Hey, Deepshade! Wait until the elders, kits and queens are fed!" Sparrowpelt growled, hissing at the black warrior.
Would he really make a loyal deputy?

(this is Sparrowpelt, Flamefur's brother: i meant to put this as sparrowpelts post)