Post by Stormflower; Mapleclaw on Aug 10, 2008 1:09:51 GMT -5
Here is the second book I have written. It is supposed to be a hook hanger for my story, for it is the first paragraph.
Midnightpaw padded to the right side Firestar as they sauntered back to ThunderClan Territory. As the bright silhouette of the lush forest came into view, her silky black tail entwined with his in fond embrace. Bushes framed a rocky outcrop just before the forest line as the Star Stream danced off the sides of the pebbled banks, its waters glistening in the hot sun.
Midnightpaw padded to the right side Firestar as they sauntered back to ThunderClan Territory. As the bright silhouette of the lush forest came into view, her silky black tail entwined with his in fond embrace. Bushes framed a rocky outcrop just before the forest line as the Star Stream danced off the sides of the pebbled banks, its waters glistening in the hot sun.