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Post by Bluesky on Aug 16, 2008 13:25:55 GMT -5
Name: LeafFall
Age: 1 year
Gender: she-cat
Clan: RiverClan
Rank: Warrior
Family: LeafSeed (mother) and BrambleHedge (father)
Personality: Fierce, Strong, Brave, but can be sweet and puts her clan first.
Appearance: light brown with mudish looking patches
History: When LeafFall joined Riverclan, she knew she instantly fit in. She is one of the fastest runners in her clan.
RP Sample: It was a cold Leaf-bare, and all the prey were hiding. LeafFall opened her mouth and tasted the air, mouse. It was under a tree nibling on leaves. She stalked it and caught it with one swift swipe of her paw.
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Post by Midnightstar on Aug 16, 2008 14:36:57 GMT -5
First, cats are not aloud to have other heritage, like I said. You had put, 'when she joined RiverClan, she knew she instantly fit in'. Second, they don't usually hunt prey, they fish. You put prey hunting in your RP sample.
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Post by Flamefur on Sept 14, 2008 19:34:07 GMT -5
maybe should be changed... good points, Morgy
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