LeafFall

[Bluesky]

Name: LeafFall

Age: 1 year

Gender: she-cat

Clan: RiverClan

Rank: Warrior

Family: LeafSeed (mother) and BrambleHedge (father)

Personality: Fierce, Strong, Brave, but can be sweet and puts her clan first.

Appearance: light brown with mudish looking patches

History: When LeafFall joined Riverclan, she knew she instantly fit in. She is one of the fastest runners in her clan.

RP Sample: It was a cold Leaf-bare, and all the prey were hiding. LeafFall opened her mouth and tasted the air, mouse. It was under a tree nibling on leaves. She stalked it and caught it with one swift swipe of her paw.

[Midnightstar]

First, cats are not aloud to have other heritage, like I said. You had put, 'when she joined RiverClan, she knew she instantly fit in'. Second, they don't usually hunt prey, they fish. You put prey hunting in your RP sample.

[Flamefur]

maybe should be changed...

good points, Morgy